The light goes to shadows and the dark comes. I'm frightened out of my skin, I don't know what's going to happen, suddenly Boom Bam Crash! I hear cries and screams. I crawl onto the battle field. Suddenly I see blood driping from my arm, my leg and worst of all my head. I'm thinking this will be the end. As I walk forwards I fall into a shell hole, when I hear some weeping and then I see a German. Sorry I landed in the wrong place. Then there were no more gun shots heard. Yay its the end of the war. Then I realised the German was pointing his gun at me. I quickly jumped out of the shell hole, that was a close one. We soon went back on the ships and back home.
by Grace
Hi Grace,
ReplyDeletethat description was so hooking I didn't want to stop reading it.
AMAZING.
From Grace, Kassidy,Liam
Hay grace
ReplyDeleteReally (really) like your war I want to read so much more love so much!!!!!
Great story:)
For EMILY!!