Friday, October 23, 2015

On The Beach

When I was walking on the soft, cold, smooth sand I heard the sound of the crashing waves. The sun was rising.  It had all sorts of colours mixed together like pinks, oranges and reds. The freezing water was flowing over my feet. What a lovely day at the beach.
By Arthur
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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousOctober 28, 2015 at 10:27 AM

    Hi Arthur,
    We thought your story about the beach was really interesting, we liked your adjectives and your describing words what a good post.
    From Kalia ,Daisy and Briarn

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  2. AnonymousOctober 30, 2015 at 9:53 AM

    i like your describing words lucian

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  3. AnonymousOctober 30, 2015 at 10:12 AM

    I like the way you used inchrsing words . - Sofia B

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