Monday, March 24, 2014

More independent writing

                            MY STORY

 I was walking down the road, listening to my music, then BANG!I heard a really loud bang, and then suddenly, next thing I knew I was twirling around in circles, falling to my doom.
 Hi, what I'm about to tell you is a weird(in so many ways) gross, but mostly, my story of my life. Its an amazing journey through time and space(and even darkness)


 Okay then enough about that because my story is starting in 3...2...1 now. Darkness was every where, as far as the eye could see. Then foot steps came echoing through the darkness.
 " someone Th...Th...there?" I spoke, while shivering.
 I was starting to panic, but then I saw light. I ran to it as quick as possible(not knowing what was lurking there) and threw myself onto the luscious green grass.


When I stood up onto my feet, I noticed some bushes were shaking. "Oh please help someone, HELP!" I screamed until I could hear my echo. I shut my eyes as quick as I could. I noticed some growling. I hope it's not dribbling over me like they do in the movies. I opened my eyes, and saw an ant. "So thats what was scaring me." I said, with a smile on my face."Ok, you got me, off you go, hurry up, move, MOOOVVE! The ferocious beast was getting on my nerves. I got my knife out and tried to cut it. But it bit me. I saw a monkey and suddenly saw darkness again.

BY MMN(Marley)


  1. Hi Marley,
    What a great piece of writing. You used lots of interesting language to make it exciting. Great Job!
    :) Courtney

  2. great story marley,
    really good story.
    i think you should make chapter three.
    ;-) violet