Fast Food
Fast food is disgusting
Its really vile and gross
Fast food makes me sick
Its the food I hate the most
Fast food is an abomination
That spreads throughout this mighty nation
From Antartica to Timbuktu
Great Scott this will not do
How did this edible virus last
Till it grew so great and fast
And even now its tickets valid
Anyone for a bowl of salad?
What a great poem Queenie - it made me laugh and laugh and laugh!!!! Well done.
ReplyDeleteAnne (Griffin's mum)
Hi Queenie,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed hearing you perform this wonderful poem in Room 11. You are a very clever writer.
Helloooo Queenie
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading this poem. Its really great to how hear how you think of fast food exspecilly in such a lovely poem! P.s I do think Fast Food is quite bad but I cant stop :O Its so yummy! :D
Nina :)
This is such a cool poem with excellent & unexpected rhymes & a very fresh attitude. I love how it sounds like a rap. But why does it also make me hungry???
ReplyDeleteThanks for all the cool comments
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ReplyDeletethat was the coolest poem i've ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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THAT WAS AN AWESOME POEM WITH RYHMES I COULDNT THINK OF!!!!!!KEEP IT UP!
ReplyDeleteHI Queenie, I agree fast food is not good, I wonder why we all like it so much, what makes it addictive?
ReplyDeleteGreat poem Queenie.
ReplyDeleteI hate fast food even though it's so tempting to eat.
Keep up the good writing.