Tuesday, July 9, 2013

A Poem to Ponder, by Queenie

Fast Food

Fast food is disgusting
Its really vile and gross

Fast food makes me sick
Its the food I hate the most

Fast food is an abomination
That spreads throughout this mighty nation

From Antartica to Timbuktu
Great Scott this will not do

How did this edible virus last
Till it grew so great and fast

And even now its tickets valid
Anyone for a bowl of salad?


11 comments:

  1. What a great poem Queenie - it made me laugh and laugh and laugh!!!! Well done.

    Anne (Griffin's mum)

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  2. Hi Queenie,

    I really enjoyed hearing you perform this wonderful poem in Room 11. You are a very clever writer.

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  3. Helloooo Queenie

    I really enjoyed reading this poem. Its really great to how hear how you think of fast food exspecilly in such a lovely poem! P.s I do think Fast Food is quite bad but I cant stop :O Its so yummy! :D

    Nina :)

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  4. This is such a cool poem with excellent & unexpected rhymes & a very fresh attitude. I love how it sounds like a rap. But why does it also make me hungry???

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    1. Thanks for all the cool comments

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  5. that is the coolest thing EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  6. that was the coolest poem i've ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  7. that was such an awesome topic with even better rhymes

    ; )

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  8. THAT WAS AN AWESOME POEM WITH RYHMES I COULDNT THINK OF!!!!!!KEEP IT UP!

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  9. HI Queenie, I agree fast food is not good, I wonder why we all like it so much, what makes it addictive?

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  10. Great poem Queenie.
    I hate fast food even though it's so tempting to eat.
    Keep up the good writing.

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