How Islands Were Made.
This is the story of the world.
It was noon. The sun was blocked out with ash clouds. The volcano was almost erupting. The lake and the mountains were shaking, lava was spitting out of the volcano and hissing on the water. The water was blue and purple. The sand was shaking so your feet sank into the ground.
Sitting on a tiger on the sand was the goddess of weaponry and archery. Her tiger had thorn sharp claws and knife sharp teeth. The goddess had one sword, two daggers, one axe and a bow.
The tiger bared his teeth in a snarl and leapt a giant leap onto the top of the volcano. It scooped up a rock with his teeth and crushed it in a single bite, as a giant dragon reared up from the sea.
When the goddess drew back her bow and released the battle had begun and so had the eruption. Thousands of rocks were pouring out of the volcano, forming islands, big and little. Some piled up to make countries. Some tiny, so they were just little shelters floating. The sea dragon was bleeding and bristled with arrows. The fight took a day. Then the goddess shot a stream of arrows into the dragon and it dived into the water and then there were....islands.
By Will and Zac
Well done Will and Zac. You have used a really descriptive setting which I could picture in my head. Also loved your idea of the rocks turning into islands. Keep up the great work
ReplyDeleteWow! what a great descriptive story you have written together Will and Zac.
ReplyDeletehi will and zac I loved your story. i liked how you used so many adjectives and how you described everything it felt like i was really there!
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