Wednesday, May 23, 2012

Another great piece of writing


In an island called Sylvania there were white sugar beaches and rocky, jagged edges of the mountains and volcano. The blue beams of the waterfall shone through the lime green forests as tall as  skyscrapers.
There’s a lava god who lives in the biggest volcano on the island. He’s got hot MAGMA hands and feet. Europtur, the lava god, has dried up lava spikes on his torso for protection. He controls volcanoes with his evil magma powers. He can also control the vicious fire breathing dragons that live on the island.
Europtur used the fire breathing dragons to take over the king’s castle that has a rich and rude king and a boulevard princess called Gracie Angela-Darling (full name). People called her Grace for short. 
Meanwhile in a village called Swansberry (everyone had a fairy there), there was a boy who didn’t have one. He was a lonely, fair haired boy called Praven, with brown eyes that completed his handsome face. Praven had an older brother called Blade. He is mean, strong and good at everything except for being nice to his younger brother. 
One day Praven heard in the news that the princess got kidnapped two hours ago. He rushed to the rocky mountains. All of the rocks from the mountains were coming in front of him. BAM one of the giant rocks hit him. He was a bit hurt. He didn’t know what to do. He just dodged the rest of the rocks. 
Once the rocks were gone he climbed up the mountain very slowly because of his hurt leg. 
He saw the lava god who summoned four dragons. Praven stopped. He felt a tingle in his stomach. He was scared. The dragons surrounded him. He was ready to surrender when he saw his older brother (Blade) flying on a pegasus. He had a blade and a kite shield. Blade was ready to open fire with his razor sharp, jagged-edged blade. He threw the blade at the lava god’s torso. It killed him in under a second. The dragons fell down on the hard rocky ground. 
After the brothers saw the princess. Next day they were heroes. Everyone was happy to see the princess. The King and Queen gave the brothers the blade of strength and the blade of intensity. 
By Flynn and Aum. 

2 comments:

  1. Hi boys ! Oh how I miss reading your writing everyday. You are both gifted writers with a talent for using your imaginations. I could imagine there was a lot of group work in order to get that polished piece of writing finished.

    I wished the ending didn't happen so soon. I wanted to keep reading. Maybe that is something you can work on for your next piece of amazing writing!

    Andrea

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