Thursday, March 19, 2015

POM POM FISH





POM POM FISH

 Rainbow pom pom fish dances around the ocean floor
Silver scales turn rainbow as the sun gleams on its back
Blue, yellow, red, pink, black pom poms bounce up and down on its fin
White eyes are almost too big for its head
Beads on its tail twinkle everytime it moves
Thin waist shimmers when it catches the light

 By Kassidy
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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 24, 2015 at 10:30 AM

    Hi Kassidy,
    Omg so rainbow! AMAZINGNESS!
    From Liam =D

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  2. EmmaMarch 24, 2015 at 10:32 AM

    Hi Kassidy,
    I love your story!! When I read it I can imagine it in my head! It has some amazing describing words in it! Can't wait to hear another story by you! :-)
    From Emma

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  3. EloiseMarch 30, 2015 at 12:10 PM

    Hi Kassidy,
    Great fish poem POM POM FISH sounds amazing! Awesome describing words!
    From Eloise

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  4. AnonymousMarch 30, 2015 at 12:26 PM

    Hi Kassidy,
    I think you used good describing words. I could picture it in my mind. I like your pom pom colous you said.
    Kalia

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