Tuesday, March 24, 2015

Aloha(haiku poem) By Daisy

Aloha

Walking in the lights
lights sneaking around the field
The fresh smell of food
By Daisy

6 comments:

  1. hi daisy
    love your story so cool

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  2. Hi Kalia,
    What an amazing Haiku poem great job.

    By Briarn

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  4. H Daisy,
    I liked how you said the Fresh smell of food,cool syllables your Haiku poem was really cool.
    Kalia

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  5. Hi Daisy,
    I love your haiku. It sounds exactly like Aloha.
    From Ashley.

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  6. hi daisy
    love your haiku so so i can picture it in my mind
    Emily

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