Thursday, August 1, 2013




Lies.

 Lies are evil, not good or glad, 
Lies are very, very bad.

  Some people tell them about their dog,
Some people tell them about a frog. 

 Everyone could tell a lie, from a person to a fly
Don't ask me why?

 Lies are found in books and movies, 
One was over a bad 'smoothie'.

 Lies are told to parents and sisters, 
Some over cuts, some over blisters.

 Whether a lie is good or bad, 
Its bound to make someone sad. 

 By Amy
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11 comments:

  1. Year 3/4 Grey Lynn ScribblersAugust 3, 2013 at 2:57 PM

    Hi Amy,

    Lies are bad. They make me sad. However, the rhyming in your post has made me glad.

    I can rhyme just like you. Well done Amy. Keep writing and pushing yourself. You're a talented writer.

    Andrea

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  2. NicolaAugust 4, 2013 at 9:23 AM

    Nice rhyming Amy and there is a good message in your poem. You are fantastic at creative writing, keep it up.

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  3. AnetemaAugust 5, 2013 at 12:04 PM

    Hey Amy,
    I love your poem it is a master peice.I think you could become a writer when you are older.

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  4. HannnahAugust 5, 2013 at 12:11 PM

    Hi Amy
    I really like how your poem rhyme.
    Lies are really bad.You should be a poem writter when you grow up.

    Hannah

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  5. kahmaAugust 5, 2013 at 12:13 PM

    Hi amy,
    I love your poem it has provocted me to stop telling lies.

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  6. InaiseAugust 6, 2013 at 12:04 PM

    Hi Amy,

    I really like your poem. I think you have done a great job. I really like how your poem rhymes and yes lies are very bad.

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  7. mason andreAugust 6, 2013 at 12:20 PM

    Hi Amy,

    You are such a great poem writer I also agree lies are very bad and great rhyming.
    You wrote a amazing poem and I agree that lying is horrible.



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  8. Room 10 Grey LynnAugust 9, 2013 at 11:53 AM

    HI Amy, great rhyming and I love the way you have got your message across. I am enjoying your poems

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  9. VIOLET!!!August 13, 2013 at 12:18 PM

    Wow amy, thats very very true!

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  10. poppyAugust 13, 2013 at 6:43 PM

    hi amy,
    I will not lie any more thanks to your poem
    p.s you are clever at rhyming

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  11. Room 14 Seekers of KnowledgeAugust 14, 2013 at 10:01 AM

    Hi

    I really liked your poem

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