DESCRIPTIONS!
Room 12 have been learning about descriptions.
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A description has to have a begining, middle and end.
I have written a description on monty, our class bird to show you.
MONTY THE MISCHIEVOUS BUDGIE!!
Monty is Room 12s playful but cheeky budgie.
He is the size of a 4 months old budgie, which is quite small.
He is as green as green moss with a dark blue tail as blue as the night sky.
His head is a fluro yellow with blue dots on his checks.
His shape is oval with an oval head.
His feathers are sleek and silky.
He is very social and loves exercise
He stays at room 12 in the week and goes home to sandie or Kerry or a Room 12 student in the weekends.
Monty is a great class pet and i’m glad to have him.
BY AMY.
Hi Amy,
ReplyDeleteYou have written a very informative description of Montie. I like how you described his feathers as sleek and silky.