Descriptions

We have been learning to write descriptions. Today we made up some animals, and had to describe them.
What do you think?

Walony
The Walony is a cross between a walrus and a shetland pony,it is muddy brown with a soft burgundy  mane and tail , it has shiny white tusks that glimmer in the sun.

The Walony eats fish flavored hay ,which is made by drying seaweed and adding fish  blood.

It likes walking around under water and enjoys being alone.

It lives under water in a cave with at least two other Walony’s.

The Walony is a really cool animal.

By Poppy.