Wednesday, October 5, 2011

Rugby

Rugby
Dan Carter
Dodging tackling running
kicks the ball hard
passing sweating playing
boots grass
Worldcup
           By Sophie

3 comments:

  1. Hi it's shae from room 13 ,

    Is Dan Carter your super all black he is my faviourate it is a great poem I can't say 1 bad thing

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  2. Wow - it really sounded like a rugby game - great poem Sophie - pity Dan got injured!

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  3. Hi Sophie
    I really love your story about Dan Carter.It is very cool, I think that you might be the best in your class at making poems. What kind of poem is that?

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