Monday, October 24, 2011

Rugby Poem

He was a boy who became
a talented man
an extraordinary  kicker
a super star
a brilliant passer
a cool curver
He is always prepared
never scared
often scary
He is Jimmy Cowan
         
By Madeline
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7 comments:

  1. ninaOctober 25, 2011 at 12:07 PM

    Hi Maddy we love your rugby poem and yes we would be scared of Jimmy Cowan,if he was going to tackle us,
    from Nina and josie.

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  2. Emma Rm15October 25, 2011 at 12:12 PM

    Hi Madeline,
    I really enjoyed reading your poem,
    I also liked all the descriptive words you used.
    Well done.

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  3. Minna and TessOctober 25, 2011 at 12:20 PM

    Hi Madeline,
    we really liked your poem,
    we think it described Jimmy Cowan really well and the content of your poem was fantastic.
    Great job.

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  4. Maia and FayeOctober 25, 2011 at 12:25 PM

    Hi Madeline,
    we thought you said lots of positive stuff about Jimmy Cowan but we also liked on how you said he was scary!!!!
    Your use of adjectives was very interesting. Keep up the good work!
    From Maia and Faye Rm 15 Grey Lynn School.

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  5. JosiahOctober 31, 2011 at 9:59 AM

    Great story Madeline about the rugby world cup.
    I liked your poem because I like sport.
    From Josiah at Stonefields School.

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  6. DashaNovember 14, 2011 at 9:47 AM

    Wow Madeline!
    that was a very awesome poem. I liked how you used lots of explanation about Jimmy Cowan.
    From Dasha.

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  7. ZaraNovember 23, 2011 at 2:49 PM

    Hi Maddy
    I love your poem about Jimmy Cowan
    I would like to read it 100 times

    by Zara

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