Monday, February 22, 2010

Time

In her spare time Alex decided to right this amazing poem. Have a read and please comment.



Time

A sleek black cat ready to pounce sits n the back wall,
watching nothing but time roll by.
He wants to catch it for the glory of being young again.

By Alex
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14 comments:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 23, 2010 at 9:32 PM

    What a beautiful poem Alex. I can relate to the cat wanting to be young again! You are a natural poet, keep it up.

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  2. Nina and JosieFebruary 24, 2010 at 11:31 AM

    Dear Alex,
    we really like your poem. Well done.
    From Nina and Josie in Room 8.

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  3. AnonymousFebruary 25, 2010 at 7:32 PM

    wow alex love it minna

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  4. Andrea FaleFebruary 25, 2010 at 9:19 PM

    Another poem full of symbolism and deep meanings hidden behind your word choices. I miss reading your poems so keep writing them and posting them.
    Well done.
    Andrea

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  5. AnonymousFebruary 28, 2010 at 2:39 PM

    super Alex. what a beautiful poem,we can't wait till your next great work. keep on doing great things. Maia and Madeline

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  6. AnonymousFebruary 28, 2010 at 6:07 PM

    again WOW i can note believe my eyes from MINNA

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  7. AnonymousMarch 11, 2010 at 1:09 AM

    Alex, you are already a poet. You capture so much in these three lines.

    In other news, I assume that Baylee or one of her friends from our Flat Stanley cultural exchange class in Salt Lake City, USA, has been checking out the Room 12 blog because a flag from that area has popped up on the map of recent visitors. Thank you all for helping Minna with her reply to Baylee. They were really excited that your whole class had got behind the project!

    Ali (Minna's mum) x

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  8. AnonymousMarch 17, 2010 at 10:44 AM

    Hi Alex,
    Your poem is so awesome! Keep up the good work.
    From Loimata - room 11

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  9. AnonymousMarch 17, 2010 at 10:53 AM

    Kia ora Alex,
    I really enjoyed the poem you wrote. I cant wait to see your next awesome work.


    From Lorietta in room 11

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  10. AnonymousMarch 17, 2010 at 11:00 AM

    Hi Alex,
    I loved the poem you wrote!!! I cant wait to see more of your excellent work.


    From Savannah in room 11@Grey Lynn

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  11. AnonymousMarch 24, 2010 at 12:28 PM

    A poet already cant belive it.keep writing poems cause i LOVE THEM.




    zahrah in rm 12

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  12. John CampbellMarch 24, 2010 at 8:15 PM

    Dear Alex, even though you read that poem to me at home, I am very proud to see it up here and to see how well it reads on your wonderful Class Blog.

    Well done!

    Love from Daddy.

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  13. sally campbellMay 29, 2010 at 10:58 PM

    Dearest Alex,
    I'm the proudest auntie in the whole world.
    You are the coolest and cleverest niece an auntie could wish for.
    Beautiful.
    Love Sally xxx

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  14. RosieJune 3, 2010 at 5:19 PM

    I just love your poem Alex and am very proud that you wrote it in my garden. I treasure the copy you wrote out for me so beautifully. Come back and write some more. Love Rosie xxx

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