Tuesday, June 9, 2009

Olivia Trying to Persuade You

We are learning about persuasive writing. I wrote my story then I illustrated it using Kidpix. 
I hope I have persuaded you on why dogs should not be at school.


  1. Maybe the school could have a doggie plastic bag dispenser near the gates so that owners can deal with their doggies droppings. I don't think they should be allowed on the playgrounds or the field, only to walk to school and then out again.

  2. great olivia you persuaded me from isla