Friday, May 15, 2009

Another superb piece of persuasive writing

Zoe and Madeline have recorded their fabulous ideas about why Room 9 is the best! What do you think?

5 comments:

  1. Dear Zoe and Madeline,

    Cohen and I loved watching and listening to why Room 9 is the best class ever. You have learned lots of facts about Antarctica. Keep working hard and we cannot wait to learn more from Room 9.
    Mrs Fale

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  2. Hi Zoe and Madeline
    This is great, you've completely convinced me that Room 9 is the best class ever! Keep up the good work!
    -Zoe's Mum

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  3. hello Room 9 from Queenstown, nice to see you Jack and Zoe - two neeblings in the same class.
    Alexa

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  4. Mrs. Jensen (Mrs. Fale's Eng. teacher,Canada)May 18, 2009 at 11:39 AM

    Hi, Room 9, from near Sarnia, Ontario, Canada:
    Although I'm far too old now, I wish that I had been in a lovely place like Room 9 when I was young, like Zoe and Madeline. Girls, you did a wonderful job of your narration, and I think your teacher, Mrs. Fale, has done a fabulous thing to get all of you onto the Internet so people far away like me can see what you're doing. Congratulations, girls! (You too, Andrea!)

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  5. Dear Zoe and Madeline,
    Wow! Your class is amazing. It sounds like you have been learning really interesting things from really great teachers. I enjoyed the way you presented your work together, speaking with exression, and making it really easy for your audience to listen to and understand.
    Well done.
    Love from
    Mrs Jarman

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